The Children: New Image, New Title, Just Plain New
So, as most of you know, not too long ago I had put up a story called the Children, and it was pretty popular amound those who read it, but I personally wasn't happy with it. I didn't feel really in tune with the plot, or its structure entirley, so, I took it down and began deconstructing it so I could put it back together, in a better, more MFAK way. In the end, a lot of things happened.
For one, there's no longer a seperate universe. I felt kind of cheap for using this world's laguages and cultures in a different demension een all together, so I changed it. How much, you'll see in a short